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Forces Beyond Our Control-Controlled Assessment

Shakespeare within his play uses literary devices on characters facing forces such as love, death, fate which are all beyond their control. One main theme bringing the poems ‘Do not go gentle into that good night’ by Dylan Thomas, On My First Sonne by Ben Jonson and Hamlet the play by William Shakespeare, is death. Moreover, the poems are based on real life experiences involving lots of emotion.

The poem by Dylan Thomas was about his father dying and he expresses his emotions through anger as within his poem he repetitively stated, ‘Rage, rage against the dying of light’. The second poem by Ben Jonson is about his son dying however, he shows acceptance to his death and believes he should celebrate the 7 years he had with son rather than mourning and showing anger. Ben shows this by stating, ‘ Seven yeeres thou wert lent to me..’. Rudyard Kipling’s poem was based on going to war and being enthusiastic about it he showed this by stating, ‘We can make good all loss except the loss of turning back’. This statement means getting shot in broad daylight is not the worry however, not going to war and staying at home is the worst decision you could make as its cowardly. Lastly, hamlet written by Shakespeare was about hamlets hate towards his uncle due to him having an affair with his mum and killing his father to take the throne. He then elaborate’s on this by talking about whether he should let everything out and go to the full extent of proving his uncle guilty and getting revenge by killing him or to just let it be, he represents this by quoting, ‘Whether ’tis Nobler in the mind to suffer the slings and arrows of outrageous fortune, or to take arms against a sea of troubles..’.  As a brief summary of all these pieces of writing they all relate by showing the forces beyond our control such as fate, death and love. However, its all shown in different ways and looked at from different point of views.

I am now going to talk about literary devices such as metaphors, personification and metre used by the authors to explore forces beyond our control.

A metaphor used in Hamlets soliloquy by Shakespeare is ‘The slings and arrows of outrageous fortune’. Here fortune is described as an aggressive force that is trying to attack you with slings and arrows. Hamlet believes fate is against him by representing fate as slings and arrows which are harmful weapons and is contemplating whether to take the easy way out by suicide or to go against fate and kill his uncle. However, hamlet assumes that suicide is a postive option in his current situation. He then realises suicide is not a wise option as he states, ‘..Who would fardels bear..but that the dread of something after death, the undiscovered country, from whose bourn no traveller returns puzzles the will’. By hamlet stating ‘the undiscovered country’, representing death as he sees death as an undiscovered country.

A metaphor used in the poem On My First Sonne by Ben Jonson is ‘Seven yeeres thou wert lent to me, and i thee pay, exacted by thy fate’, this shows Ben’s son being lent to him being described as an object. Moreover, the statment, ‘on the just day’ implys that fate is fair and that the debt of his son’s life needed to be paid back. However, he then leads onto another point of view by saying, ‘O could i lose all father, now’, this shows him changing the agony of his loss. Even though his son is gone he remains being a father.

A metaphor shown in Do not go gentle into that good night by Dylan Thomas would be ‘..words had forked no lightning’. This metaphor expresses that the words have never impacted life ‘lightning’ being the metaphor. This links to On My First Sonne as both poems refer back to their own poems the effect of this is showing that even words cannot bring back the dead however hard they try.Death is the force being shown here.

I am now going to talk about personification and its relations to forces beyond our control.

An example of personification in the poem On My First Sonne by Ben Jonson is ‘To have so soone scap’d worlds, and fleshes rage’, this represents the world raging. Life is described as a place of pain and anger this refers to forces beyond our control. This could link with Hamlets soliloquy by him mentioning flesh also personifying it-Hamlet sees death as an end to ‘The heart-ache,and the thousand natural shocks that flesh is heir to?’ here flesh is personifying the pain that life involves.

A statement in the poem Do not go gentle into that good night by Dylan thomas representing personification would be, ‘..the dying of light’ this uses a human feature for light by describing it as dying which is not possible. Furthermore, this refers to death as the force beyond our control. He could also be representing light as life as its the opposite to dark being represented as death.

I am now going to talk about the different writers use of metre and the relation to forces beyond our control.

In Ben Jonson’s poem the metaphor that relates to lending makes us feel that Jonson has accepted the death of his son. The sustained iambic pentameter further supports this theme of acceptance by using statements such as, ‘Farewell, thou child of my right hand and joy’ and ‘As what he loves may never like too much’, this is accepting however, is rather tragic as his not allowing himself to love a human being again. The poem is put to a sudden stop in the line, ‘O, could  I loose all father now. For why..’. When reading this we hit an invisible brick wall of silence expressing silence of death which refers to forces beyond our control. Furthermore, the line ‘Ben Jonson his best piece of poetrie’, the iambic pentameter suddenly stops here emphasising the fact that’s his most important piece of poetry is ironically about the death of his son.

Metre is shown within Dylan Thomas’s poem Do not go gentle into that good night

Metre being shown in Hamlets soliloquy

Forces Beyond Our Control- Planning

Quotes: ”Almost these mindless waters work, as though they had a soul.” This is a quote from the poem ‘A song in a storm’ By Rudyard Kipling, it represents the language device of personification as the sea is being described with features of a human or an animal. Rudyard does this by saying the waters work as if they had a soul, meaning the way the water is treating the ship as if its personal and the ship is an opponent to the water. However, water is not able to act like that as it does not include a soul or any other features of a human.

”Rage, rage against the dying of light.” This quote is from the poem ‘Do not go gentle into that good night’ By Dylan Thomas, it also represents the language device of personification as light cannot possible die as only animals and humans have the power of dying, this explains the use of the device of personification. Moreover, Dylan mentioning to rebel against the dying of light shows he wants to fight death as there no longer being light represents death as death is dark.

”To have so soone scap’d worlds, and fleshes rage.” This quote is from ‘On my first Sonne’ By Ben Johnson, this is another representation of personification as he is giving the world features of a human or animal such as being angry and having flesh.

How does Shakespeare in his play Hamlet and the selected poets use literary devices to present characters who are facing forces in the world beyond their control?

Shakespeare within his play uses literary devices on characters facing forces such as love, death, fate which are all beyond their control. One main theme bringing the poems ‘Do not go gentle into that good night’ by Dylan Thomas, On My First Sonne by Ben Jonson and Hamlet the play by William Shakespeare, is death. Moreover, the poems are based on real life experiences involving lots of emotion.

Ben Jonson:

Acceptance, as shown in the metaphor that relates to lending. The sustained iambic meter further supports this.

Dylan Thomas:

Anger and denial, shown in the interruption of the iambic pentameter with the words “rage, rage”

Rudyard Kipling:

Courage against the inevitability of war (you have an example of the sea). The metre is also iambic without interruption.

William Shakespeare (Hamlet):

Equivocation, “To be or not to be” soliloquy. Metaphor: “Slings and arrows…” Iambic pentameter.

Within the soliloquy in Hamlet the play, act 3 scene 1 Shakespeare uses quotes such as ”To die–to sleep, No more; and by sleep to say  we end”

 

ESSAY STRUCTURE *(ORDER)

P1. Intro

P2. Explain what the force each author is identifying that is beyond their/their character’s control

P3. Metaphors used by each

P4. Metre used by each

P5. Personification used by each

P6. Additional ideas

P7. Conclusion.

Act 1 scenes 1-4 summary Hamlet

Scene 1: Midnight at the castle of Elsinore in Denmark, Barnado is the guard when he hears someone approaching which he then challenges to find out its a man named Francisco coming to take over guard. Furthermore, two others arrive named Marcellus with another guard and Horatio who is new to the area and friends with price Hamlet.

Scene 2: Inside the castle in a state room is Claudius the brother of old Hamlet and uncle of prince Hamlet. He has married Gertrude, the widow of the recent king. Claudius claims that he is mourning over the loss of he’s brother however, is happier now marrying the queen.

Scene 3:

50 Dead Men Walking

It all started off with a young thief from Northern Ireland named Martin, trying to make enough money to provide for his mum so called ‘mam’ in a corrupt country where no-one is at peace. He makes his living by stealing clothes then selling them onto the locals however, a job like he’s is way against his country’s rules as the Irish Republican Army known as the IRA wanted to protect their community and everyone in it by torchering anyone disrespecting the community such as Martin and the main objective separating their country from the UK as they wanted to be a 100% Catholic union. Unfortunately, it was not that easy as they’re was another illegal army wanting to keep the UK together and the local police pretty much owned Northern Ireland as everywhere you went they’re was a soldier, camera, gun pointing at you due to these 2 armies. This Prodestant army was called the Ulster Defence Force however, they was as ruthless as the IRA. No-one wanted to surrender causing major disruption and riots within Northern Ireland.

However, Martin could not care less bout the IRA and carried on doing what he was doing to get by. He was pulled in by the local police now and then as they knew for sure what he was up to but liked he’s ruthlessness and the fact that no fear was shown. Due to this they offered him a job involving lots of money, nice car but he kept his pride an continued to deny the offer. Until one day they give him an offer almost impossible to turn down a big amount of cash, a brand new highly expensive car and protection for him and his family. All he had to do was call the ‘Special Branch Intelligence Officer’ so called Fergus. After seeing what he got himself involved in and the brutality of innocent people he knew this was the right decision and grabbed the opportunity.

Martin joined the IRA as that was part of his job given by Fergus and retrieved back to Fergus every time a bomb was in place by the IRA helping the police force to deny a huge loss of officers every time he told Fergus about a bomb. The reason being is Martin has had experience of seeing innocent young life’s being blown up due to this corrupt dis-agreement and wanted it to stop once and for all. So, by becoming an informer he would do so. There was  slight hints given to his IRA officers as no bombs would go off when Martin is around due to the police force needing him. One weekend a big job was going down involving Martin were the IRA was going to kill innocent lives in a local pub with guns given out by Martin. Moreover, an agent gets shot and the officers have been given guns with no bullets due to Martin who realise what Martins up to when he escapes from the pub without being touched. Fergus was not alerted quick enough to keep Martin safe from the IRA as they are now on his back by the time he gets home they take him away and torcher him for hours on end. Fergus is now aware of Martins absence and finds lots of commotion outside a flat known to have a bomb around it however, Martin is inside being abused, when their is a nock at the door and it’s his old freind wanting answers from Martin. Due to this disruption Martin sees a chance and makes a jump out a window and fortunately surviving, were Fergus is there to protect and get him to the hospital. The IRA do not give up and continue to chase the ambulance but are unfortunate in catching Marin and Fergus.

While Martin is being treated for many broken bones and concussions he’s girlfriend and baby boy are hiding at her mums trying to stay out of the IRA’s way, as they are still not giving up sending girls to the hospital saying they’re Martins wife just to find out his location in the hospital. But, Fergus soon realises and keeps Martin at his house way out of trouble.

As years go by peace finally approaches but not for Martin as many still want him dead, he survived 6 bullets and will never see his family again as he changed his identity and location living a different life somewhere else in the world.