Forces Beyond Our Control-Controlled Assessment

Shakespeare within his play uses literary devices on characters facing forces such as love, death, fate which are all beyond their control. One main theme bringing the poems ‘Do not go gentle into that good night’ by Dylan Thomas, On My First Sonne by Ben Jonson and Hamlet the play by William Shakespeare, is death. Moreover, the poems are based on real life experiences involving lots of emotion.

The poem by Dylan Thomas was about his father dying and he expresses his emotions through anger as within his poem he repetitively stated, ‘Rage, rage against the dying of light’. The second poem by Ben Jonson is about his son dying however, he shows acceptance to his death and believes he should celebrate the 7 years he had with son rather than mourning and showing anger. Ben shows this by stating, ‘ Seven yeeres thou wert lent to me..’. Rudyard Kipling’s poem was based on going to war and being enthusiastic about it he showed this by stating, ‘We can make good all loss except the loss of turning back’. This statement means getting shot in broad daylight is not the worry however, not going to war and staying at home is the worst decision you could make as its cowardly. Lastly, hamlet written by Shakespeare was about hamlets hate towards his uncle due to him having an affair with his mum and killing his father to take the throne. He then elaborate’s on this by talking about whether he should let everything out and go to the full extent of proving his uncle guilty and getting revenge by killing him or to just let it be, he represents this by quoting, ‘Whether ’tis Nobler in the mind to suffer the slings and arrows of outrageous fortune, or to take arms against a sea of troubles..’.  As a brief summary of all these pieces of writing they all relate by showing the forces beyond our control such as fate, death and love. However, its all shown in different ways and looked at from different point of views.

I am now going to talk about literary devices such as metaphors, personification and metre used by the authors to explore forces beyond our control.

A metaphor used in Hamlets soliloquy by Shakespeare is ‘The slings and arrows of outrageous fortune’. Here fortune is described as an aggressive force that is trying to attack you with slings and arrows. Hamlet believes fate is against him by representing fate as slings and arrows which are harmful weapons and is contemplating whether to take the easy way out by suicide or to go against fate and kill his uncle. However, hamlet assumes that suicide is a postive option in his current situation. He then realises suicide is not a wise option as he states, ‘..Who would fardels bear..but that the dread of something after death, the undiscovered country, from whose bourn no traveller returns puzzles the will’. By hamlet stating ‘the undiscovered country’, representing death as he sees death as an undiscovered country.

A metaphor used in the poem On My First Sonne by Ben Jonson is ‘Seven yeeres thou wert lent to me, and i thee pay, exacted by thy fate’, this shows Ben’s son being lent to him being described as an object. Moreover, the statment, ‘on the just day’ implys that fate is fair and that the debt of his son’s life needed to be paid back. However, he then leads onto another point of view by saying, ‘O could i lose all father, now’, this shows him changing the agony of his loss. Even though his son is gone he remains being a father.

A metaphor shown in Do not go gentle into that good night by Dylan Thomas would be ‘..words had forked no lightning’. This metaphor expresses that the words have never impacted life ‘lightning’ being the metaphor. This links to On My First Sonne as both poems refer back to their own poems the effect of this is showing that even words cannot bring back the dead however hard they try.Death is the force being shown here.

I am now going to talk about personification and its relations to forces beyond our control.

An example of personification in the poem On My First Sonne by Ben Jonson is ‘To have so soone scap’d worlds, and fleshes rage’, this represents the world raging. Life is described as a place of pain and anger this refers to forces beyond our control. This could link with Hamlets soliloquy by him mentioning flesh also personifying it-Hamlet sees death as an end to ‘The heart-ache,and the thousand natural shocks that flesh is heir to?’ here flesh is personifying the pain that life involves.

A statement in the poem Do not go gentle into that good night by Dylan thomas representing personification would be, ‘..the dying of light’ this uses a human feature for light by describing it as dying which is not possible. Furthermore, this refers to death as the force beyond our control. He could also be representing light as life as its the opposite to dark being represented as death.

I am now going to talk about the different writers use of metre and the relation to forces beyond our control.

In Ben Jonson’s poem the metaphor that relates to lending makes us feel that Jonson has accepted the death of his son. The sustained iambic pentameter further supports this theme of acceptance by using statements such as, ‘Farewell, thou child of my right hand and joy’ and ‘As what he loves may never like too much’, this is accepting however, is rather tragic as his not allowing himself to love a human being again. The poem is put to a sudden stop in the line, ‘O, could  I loose all father now. For why..’. When reading this we hit an invisible brick wall of silence expressing silence of death which refers to forces beyond our control. Furthermore, the line ‘Ben Jonson his best piece of poetrie’, the iambic pentameter suddenly stops here emphasising the fact that’s his most important piece of poetry is ironically about the death of his son.

Metre is shown within Dylan Thomas’s poem Do not go gentle into that good night

Metre being shown in Hamlets soliloquy

Bare Vexed

Dear Isabella Kerr,

I have read your opinion on modern day speaking within social media and agree with you on some aspects. However, before all the current words in the dictionary were created, people possibly saw them as ‘slang’ or not formal, so to treat new words in the dictionary as useless is to underestimate the words themselves. Moreover, to say there is no meaning behind these words is ignorant, as for the words to be used so often in the current generation they must have some sort of reason of use. You show this attitude by stating,”..the Oxford dictionaries are awarding these dismal words a degree of permanence that is both unrealistic and unnecessary”. I feel it’s unfair to judge the words just because a younger generation has created them. Moreover, you mention that the words have been given permanence and you seem to disagree; however, you lack a strong argument as to why these words should not exist.

Another statement you made was, “..things that are no longer ‘wicked’, they’re ‘sick’ and if someone does not appeal to you they’re not ‘fugly’, they’re ‘butters’.I believe you were digging yourself in a deeper hole here. As you are also, promoting slang by saying ‘wicked’ and ‘fugly’ should be used instead of other terms; these words themselves are slang dating back to the 1980’s. So, by saying this you are diging yourself into a deeper hole as within the 1980′ there may have been someone like you also, dis-agreeing on the types of slang being used. Moreover, in years to come new versions of slang are more than likely to come along that some may be against and give examples of ‘original’ slang which is used in the present day. You need to agree to dis-agree in this situation as your not going to win this non backed up argument.

The 21st century is clearly changing the world and you need to notice this. You yourself admit that your out of touch with youth culture, but slang and new words have been vital within works of literature dating back through the centuries. You claim that Shakespeare would be ‘turning in his grave’.However, in his plays he included a creation of 1700 words which were self made such as gnarled, rant, swagger, dwindle etc. These were new words made by Shakespeare if you was present would you have included these in the dictionary? You also say ‘if the only words we can create are unimaginative hybrids of pre-existing words, or worse, shortening of already perfectly good words, then what hope is there?’ Not only did Shakespeare make up words he also played with them in imaginative ways, shortening them, connecting ones that haven’t been used together before, and turning nouns into verbs and verbs into adjectives. You claim you ‘hate’ the shortening of words however, miss interpret that by using the word dismal.

 

Equality

The most hated Criminals in football:

Latest Barclay’s Premier League news. You can only enter if your teams involves 3 Black people, 3 Romanians, 3 Asians, 1 disabled gay man and one white English man being the goalie as a token player. That’s only if he signs the £35 a week contract due to it being an English league we do not want the game to revolve around English people as it may look racist to other ethnicities. Furthermore, no English players are allowed to take free-kicks or penalties as it is not fair on the other ethnicities, disabled people and others with different interests in sex. Latest kitchen news at Chelsea football club. The chef has been sacked as he made chicken and chips for dinner which has been seen as a racial abuse towards the black members of the club, he will be going to court next month looking at a good few years in a high security prison due to he’s dangerous recipes. Latest training news at Liverpool football club. The disabled player with no legs was offered to work on the upper body meanwhile, the rest of the team does leg work, however the trainer has been sacked due to under estimating a less able person just because he had no legs. Latest training news at Tottenham Hotspur football club. The two 6 ft 5, 20 stone, gay players have made a complaint due to the coaches putting them in defence were the most contact occurs they believe its just because they interest in sex and it is homophobic. The police have got involved and stated, ” The homophobic coach will be locked up with the racist chef for as long as possible”. Latest news Arsenal football club. The white player has been told to have spray tans weekly as in team photos they don’t want the one white goalie to stand out as, just because its an English team in an English league that English players have to stand out. Unfortunately, arsenal are now on a lookout for a goalie as he was released due to refusing to have a spray tan. Lastly, England are not allowed to win any more competitions as it is unfair on other nationalities that have never won. Due to a friendly between Nigeria and England last week, it has been seen as racist that Nigeria couldn’t score regardless of England having the best defence in the world and the Nigerian strikers were blind, the English defence has all been prosecuted for not letting them score.

The world nowadays feels almost as if you have to be black, lesbian and Jewish. I as a white straight atheist male sometimes feel like I’m in the minority when in fact I am in the majority. Believing that a certain race or sexuality has to always be involved in any area of public life is racist and sexist, and an example of this is the Oscars Academy Awards. An actor named Charlotte Rampling rebelled against ‘#OscarsGoWhite’ by saying “Its racist to white people”, this is a perfect example of what i am trying to interpret as the fact that people believe that no black actors was nominated when in-fact black people may be a minority within the film industry and the ones that are just was unfortunately not good enough to make it through to the final nominees. Moreover, i believe if anything involves too much of the majority such as white people, straight people and Christians it is so called racist and against all other race’s, ethnic backgrounds,  interest in sexuality.

Now And Then

Its about to go down. The Spartans are warming up and the arena is filling up. The opposition are warming up while suffering the verbal abuse from spectators. They do not have enough fans to take over the raging roar of the home crowd. The essence of the burger vans overpower the atmosphere as meaty burgers flip on the grill. Greasy chips cook in the fat. Once cooked being covered in salt and ketchup to fill up the hungry bellys of the fans as they are about to face a long tense 90 minutes of blood, sweat and tears.The turnstiles are spinning, ‘click,click,click’, as more and more reckless bodies pile through. The roar is getting louder. The atmosphere is becoming more intense by the second, the bookmakers are taking in large amounts of money, as well as the bar due to beers after beers being bought. The gladiators are going into the changing rooms showing no emotion what so ever. As they need to get ready for the hour and a half of broken bones, abusive chants from the 60,000 spectators attending and hopefully not as much blood shown as last time out. The boys in blue are on standby  as lots of violence is for certain to occur when the opposing fans approach the North Londoners. This is no ordinary game of football this is West London vs North London, winners vs runners up, history vs the future, red vs blue, this is it. As the players walk out the atmosphere goes from average to breathtaking and so the chants begin. The nervous blood running through the veins of 22 pocket filled soldiers on the pitch. Everyone’s in position the unfortunate referee checks his watch, 3 pm it is and we are under way.

The shocking scenes of last nights catastrophe is over, there is no one to be seen its so silent. Just sixty-thousand seats and 26 turnstiles. The rain must of turned red over night, the brutal winds must of swept everyone away and the vicious warriors have left no afters for the next opposing team.Such a huge venue yet you could probably hear a pin drop when suddenly, they come marching out to their truck “left right, left right” they shout, the ground is shaking but, is it an earthquake? NO! Its the 11 soldiers coming out on top with not a scratch on their face. Furthermore, here comes the other group not looking as strong as the first. Bandages around their craniums, scars on their chest and 5-6 of them getting a free ride home in the ambulance. The grills are still greasy however the vans are closed. Besides, they deserve the day off as they took in a fortune last night. As well as the bar maids and men as they had an extremely busy night drinks after drinks being pulled at the bar due to the high spirits of some very fired up fans not to mention the old bill releasing some unfortunate, angry, drunk and dis-orderly West London chaps with a very long journey home ahead of them and that will probably include some paracetamol to get rid of the repetitive banging in their head. The bookmakers are re-opening for the later Sunday games as they need to earn back what they gave out last night. Its quite in North London,  with a positive mood, meaning that the previous night has decided that London is RED.

Forces Beyond Our Control- Planning

Quotes: ”Almost these mindless waters work, as though they had a soul.” This is a quote from the poem ‘A song in a storm’ By Rudyard Kipling, it represents the language device of personification as the sea is being described with features of a human or an animal. Rudyard does this by saying the waters work as if they had a soul, meaning the way the water is treating the ship as if its personal and the ship is an opponent to the water. However, water is not able to act like that as it does not include a soul or any other features of a human.

”Rage, rage against the dying of light.” This quote is from the poem ‘Do not go gentle into that good night’ By Dylan Thomas, it also represents the language device of personification as light cannot possible die as only animals and humans have the power of dying, this explains the use of the device of personification. Moreover, Dylan mentioning to rebel against the dying of light shows he wants to fight death as there no longer being light represents death as death is dark.

”To have so soone scap’d worlds, and fleshes rage.” This quote is from ‘On my first Sonne’ By Ben Johnson, this is another representation of personification as he is giving the world features of a human or animal such as being angry and having flesh.

How does Shakespeare in his play Hamlet and the selected poets use literary devices to present characters who are facing forces in the world beyond their control?

Shakespeare within his play uses literary devices on characters facing forces such as love, death, fate which are all beyond their control. One main theme bringing the poems ‘Do not go gentle into that good night’ by Dylan Thomas, On My First Sonne by Ben Jonson and Hamlet the play by William Shakespeare, is death. Moreover, the poems are based on real life experiences involving lots of emotion.

Ben Jonson:

Acceptance, as shown in the metaphor that relates to lending. The sustained iambic meter further supports this.

Dylan Thomas:

Anger and denial, shown in the interruption of the iambic pentameter with the words “rage, rage”

Rudyard Kipling:

Courage against the inevitability of war (you have an example of the sea). The metre is also iambic without interruption.

William Shakespeare (Hamlet):

Equivocation, “To be or not to be” soliloquy. Metaphor: “Slings and arrows…” Iambic pentameter.

Within the soliloquy in Hamlet the play, act 3 scene 1 Shakespeare uses quotes such as ”To die–to sleep, No more; and by sleep to say  we end”

 

ESSAY STRUCTURE *(ORDER)

P1. Intro

P2. Explain what the force each author is identifying that is beyond their/their character’s control

P3. Metaphors used by each

P4. Metre used by each

P5. Personification used by each

P6. Additional ideas

P7. Conclusion.

Act 3 Scenes 1-4

Scene 1:The King and Queen enter with Rosencrantz, Guildenstern,Polonius, Ophelia, and members of the court. Claudius questions Rosencrantz and Guildenstern about Hamlets behaviour. They both answer saying that Hamlet is crafty with disguising his motivations however, seems happy about the play. They are then told to encourage him and leave the court.

Scene 2:Hamlet meets with the actors and instructs them as to the nature of proper acting. He tells them not to overact, and not to use large gestures. He wishes them to be honest; he asks them to mirror nature, to be entirely realistic in their portrayals. Polonius enters and announces the arrival of the King and Queen to hear the play.

While the court assembles for the performance, Hamlet explains to Horatio how the play will help prove the Ghost’s honesty and reveal Claudius’ perfidy. He asks Horatio to watch the King and note his reaction to a specific speech in Murder of Gonzaga.

Scene 3:

Fearing that Hamlet is a threat to his life and throne, the King summons Rosencrantz and Guildenstern and instructs them to hurry and take Hamlet to England. The men agree, acknowledging that any threat to Claudius is a threat to the people of Denmark, so they will keep Denmark safe by removing Hamlet from its shores. They leave, and Polonius enters to inform the King that Hamlet is on his way to Gertrude and that Polonius plans to hide there and eavesdrop on the conversation. Promising to report back to Claudius before Claudius retires to bed, Polonius leaves.

Claudius then prays at his private altar, although he says his sin is so great that it renders him incapable of praying. He admits before God that he has committed the “primal eldest curse” by carrying out his “brother’s murder.”

Scene 4: As promised, Polonius arrives in Gertrude’s room before Hamlet and hides himself behind an arras. He instructs Gertrude to be entirely blunt with her son. Hamlet enters challenging, “Now, Mother, what’s the matter?” Gertrude tells him he has badly offended his father, meaning Claudius; Hamlet answers that she has badly offended his father, meaning King Hamlet. Hamlet intimidates Gertrude, and she cries out that he is trying to murder her. Polonius reacts from behind the curtain and yells for help. Hamlet draws his sword and thrusts it through the tapestry, killing Polonius. When Hamlet lifts the wallhanging and discovers Polonius’ body, he tells the body that he had believed he was stabbing the King. He then turns his attention to punishing Gertrude. He presses contrasting pictures of Claudius and his brother in Gertrude’s face. He points out King Hamlet’s godlike countenance and courage, likening Claudius to an infection in King Hamlet’s ear. He accuses Gertrude of lustfulness, and she begs him to leave her alone.

Act 1 scenes 1-4 summary Hamlet

Scene 1: Midnight at the castle of Elsinore in Denmark, Barnado is the guard when he hears someone approaching which he then challenges to find out its a man named Francisco coming to take over guard. Furthermore, two others arrive named Marcellus with another guard and Horatio who is new to the area and friends with price Hamlet.

Scene 2: Inside the castle in a state room is Claudius the brother of old Hamlet and uncle of prince Hamlet. He has married Gertrude, the widow of the recent king. Claudius claims that he is mourning over the loss of he’s brother however, is happier now marrying the queen.

Scene 3:

50 Dead Men Walking

It all started off with a young thief from Northern Ireland named Martin, trying to make enough money to provide for his mum so called ‘mam’ in a corrupt country where no-one is at peace. He makes his living by stealing clothes then selling them onto the locals however, a job like he’s is way against his country’s rules as the Irish Republican Army known as the IRA wanted to protect their community and everyone in it by torchering anyone disrespecting the community such as Martin and the main objective separating their country from the UK as they wanted to be a 100% Catholic union. Unfortunately, it was not that easy as they’re was another illegal army wanting to keep the UK together and the local police pretty much owned Northern Ireland as everywhere you went they’re was a soldier, camera, gun pointing at you due to these 2 armies. This Prodestant army was called the Ulster Defence Force however, they was as ruthless as the IRA. No-one wanted to surrender causing major disruption and riots within Northern Ireland.

However, Martin could not care less bout the IRA and carried on doing what he was doing to get by. He was pulled in by the local police now and then as they knew for sure what he was up to but liked he’s ruthlessness and the fact that no fear was shown. Due to this they offered him a job involving lots of money, nice car but he kept his pride an continued to deny the offer. Until one day they give him an offer almost impossible to turn down a big amount of cash, a brand new highly expensive car and protection for him and his family. All he had to do was call the ‘Special Branch Intelligence Officer’ so called Fergus. After seeing what he got himself involved in and the brutality of innocent people he knew this was the right decision and grabbed the opportunity.

Martin joined the IRA as that was part of his job given by Fergus and retrieved back to Fergus every time a bomb was in place by the IRA helping the police force to deny a huge loss of officers every time he told Fergus about a bomb. The reason being is Martin has had experience of seeing innocent young life’s being blown up due to this corrupt dis-agreement and wanted it to stop once and for all. So, by becoming an informer he would do so. There was  slight hints given to his IRA officers as no bombs would go off when Martin is around due to the police force needing him. One weekend a big job was going down involving Martin were the IRA was going to kill innocent lives in a local pub with guns given out by Martin. Moreover, an agent gets shot and the officers have been given guns with no bullets due to Martin who realise what Martins up to when he escapes from the pub without being touched. Fergus was not alerted quick enough to keep Martin safe from the IRA as they are now on his back by the time he gets home they take him away and torcher him for hours on end. Fergus is now aware of Martins absence and finds lots of commotion outside a flat known to have a bomb around it however, Martin is inside being abused, when their is a nock at the door and it’s his old freind wanting answers from Martin. Due to this disruption Martin sees a chance and makes a jump out a window and fortunately surviving, were Fergus is there to protect and get him to the hospital. The IRA do not give up and continue to chase the ambulance but are unfortunate in catching Marin and Fergus.

While Martin is being treated for many broken bones and concussions he’s girlfriend and baby boy are hiding at her mums trying to stay out of the IRA’s way, as they are still not giving up sending girls to the hospital saying they’re Martins wife just to find out his location in the hospital. But, Fergus soon realises and keeps Martin at his house way out of trouble.

As years go by peace finally approaches but not for Martin as many still want him dead, he survived 6 bullets and will never see his family again as he changed his identity and location living a different life somewhere else in the world.